Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Draft press release 3: Cause promotion


Cache Valley Area Investors Association

February 17, 2010

For immediate release

Contact Information:

President and Founder Preston Parker


Financial Independence

Stability brings peace of mind

Logan, Utah- Getting passive income above monthly expenses will help bring financial independence and more opportunity for growth .

“Understanding that making money through other means besides monthly paychecks will help individuals become financially independent,” said President Preston Parker. Most Americans go from paycheck to paycheck and struggle to make money. Many people are not happy when they have no reason not to be happy.

3 comments:

  1. Great job emphisizing the cause. I would talk a little bit more about why there is a need for this cause, and maybe more on the history of the financial independence movement, but it looks good.

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  2. well done. Your lead is good, I would focus more on the cause, and may put the quote in a different spot.

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  3. Good quote and lead! not a whole lot of information but its understandable since we didn't have a lot of time to write it. :)

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